-Photo art by: Jakub Dziubak-
There
There in that sacred space
Where dreams lay crumbled
From all the yesterdays –
There where songs are sung
And stale memories play on
The soft notes of piano keys –
There in the unfulfilled dream
Heaps of all tomorrows amid
The rearranged bar stools –
There in the Bacchus mist
Among the sad souls of night
Love comes briefly to delight –
There in that play parlor for
Lonely souls of poetic pawns
The tortured Romantic sits.
Thank you, Romantics of the
World for the beauty of your
Musical notes of such sweet pain.
- BR Chitwood – July 9, 2019 –
Please Preview my Books:
Please Follow my Blog:
Please Follow me on Twitter:
Excellent, Billy Ray.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, good John. Means a lot! ♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
That really fit the picture. Loved it.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks, Denise. Those were the days! Some good! Some bad! ♥♥
LikeLike
Oh my, such poignant writing, Billy Ray. From “stale memories” to the last line — “musical notes of such sweet pain” this is powerful writing. You amaze me! ♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
If I were to get only one such sweet comment, I would wish it from you. Tbank you, dear Gwen. Great week to you and hubby! ♥♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ah, yes! Romantics of the world unite–dyslexics of the world untie. (I had to get that in there somewhere.) Your poetry never fails to amaze me, Billy Ray.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That ‘amaze me’ better mean you liked the poem, Sir Squires! Thank you, Jay. ♥
LikeLike
Oh yes! I love your poetic flow–always have.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Jay. From you a great compliment! Bless you, good friend! ♥
LikeLike
Love the ‘dyslexics’ comment! ♥
LikeLike
Damn, Billy Ray. That just about sings. Melancholic, true, but makes me nod my head and smile a bit.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love your comment, good buddy…guess I spend too much time in that world, but, shucky durn! that’s who I am! Thank you, Tim. ♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
Keep on being you, Billy Ray. Talented and honest.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Tim…but, then, nobody’s perfect! You’re a good man, Tim, and it’s a pleasure knowing you. ♥
LikeLiked by 1 person