COLLEEN’S 2018 #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 77: CHARM & TIME, #SNYONYMSONLY
Colleen’s Tuesday’s Tanka for ‘Charm’ and ‘Time’: Using synonyms: ‘Beauty’ and ‘Span’:
Love
Beauty and Romance
Stand Proudly as Lures for Love
Through the Span of Man…
Heart Doth Govern Desire’s Depth,
Passion’s Ebbing and Flowing.
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YOU did it, Billy! Well done, and a lovely Tanka too. I love how you slip in the old poetic touches such as “doth.” Splendid. ❤
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Oh, I was hoping you would like that… Thanks so much for your patience! The brain gets sluggish once in a while! 🙂
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It was perfect! We all get brain fuzz from time to time. No worries. I’m just glad you’re sharing your poetry. ❤
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Thank you, dear lady Colleen… ♥
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Oh, I love these lines: Heart Doth Govern Desire’s Depth, Passion’s Ebb and Flow. Beautiful! ♥
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Thank you, dear Gwen…you make my day! ♥♥♥
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Lovely, Billy Ray. I see that you are catching the bug of these snappy little poems.
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Only occasionally, Robbie. I’m trying to finish my 15th book, and Social Media, as you surely know, takes so much time…it’s fun but very time-consuming! AND, I like compressing thoughts into short poems… Tanka, I had not tried, but Haiku is my favorite! You do very well, dear Lady! Sending you my best wishes… ♥
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Thank you so much. My best wishes. ♥
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